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The new scene after the rain, all things sing joyfully

Elementary school 5th grade composition 2024年11月27日 07:45 215 Pinwu

rain, this elf of nature, after spending a lot of time between heaven and earth, finally left quietly with a heart full of joy. She walked so lightly, as if she was afraid of disturbing the tranquility and beauty of the world that had just been baptized by her. And what she left behind was a picturesque and vibrant scene after the rain, like the harmonious aftermath of a grand symphony performance, echoing in every corner.

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look at the sky, like a child whose soul has been washed by the rain, clear without a trace of impurities. The clouds are as fluffy and white as cotton, and they float leisurely under the gentle breeze, as if they are holding a leisurely strolling competition on the vast stage of the sky. Father-in-law Sun also couldn't wait to poke his head out, wanting to see the world reshaped by rain. His warm light, like golden silk threads, gently sprinkled on the earth, clothing every leaf and every droplet of water with a brilliant coat, as if awarding them a medal for bravely accepting baptism. Those remaining raindrops, under the reflection of the sun, are like crystal clear pearls, embedded on the tips of the grass, petals and leaves, shimmering with charming light, as if showing off the wonderful moment of their encounter with the sun.



earth is full of vitality under the moisture of the rain. The mountains are like giants who have just come out of the bath, majestic and gentle. The trees on the mountain, after being washed by the rain, the leaves look more and more emerald green, and each leaf is like a jade carefully carved by nature, swaying gently in the breeze, making a rustling sound, as if telling the gratitude to the rain. Their branches have also been washed clean by the rain, and the black-brown bark glows with a healthy luster in the sun, like a spirited old man, proudly showing his tenacity and tenacity after going through wind and rain. The stream at the foot of the mountain also became cheerful at this time, it rushed and jumped, singing and laughing along the way. The stream water is crystal clear, and those round and smooth stones lie quietly at the bottom of the water, as if enjoying the gentle touch of the stream. Occasionally, a few small fish and shrimp shuttle and play between the stone crevices, and their agile postures add a bit of playfulness and vitality to this lively stream.



walking into that quiet woods, it was like stepping into a mysterious fairy tale world. Tall trees shaded the sky, only a little bit of sunlight was sprinkled, like golden broken diamonds scattered on the ground in the forest. The fallen leaves on the ground were soaked by rainwater and clung to the ground, like a colorful carpet on the earth. Occasionally, a few squirrels jump between the branches, their big fluffy tails like small umbrellas, drawing graceful arcs in the air. They sometimes stop, holding a pine cone with their little paws, nibbling on it with relish, and sometimes alertly pricking up their ears and listening to the movements around them, and their cute appearance adds a bit of agility and liveliness to this quiet wood. The birds in the woods also began to come alive, singing happily on the branches, as if they were holding a grand concert. some birds sing tactfully and melodiously, as if singing a lyrical slow song; Some birds sing crisply and loudly, as if they were playing a passionate trumpet. Their songs are intertwined, one after another, echoing in the woods for a long time, as if telling nature the joy and happiness after the rain.


look at the garden again, after being nourished by the rain, it is even more blooming and beautiful. The roses are delicate, and the petals are hung with water droplets, like teardrops on the cheeks of a beauty, which adds a bit of charming charm. She lowered her head slightly, as if she was shyly showing her beauty to people, and as if she was contemplating something. The peony is graceful and luxurious, and the huge flowers look particularly delicate against the green leaves. She held her head high, like a proud queen, receiving the worship of the flowers. Those elegant daisies are scattered in all corners of the garden, and although they are not as dazzling as roses and peonies, they attract people's attention with their fresh and refined temperament. They sway gently in the breeze, like a group of lively and cute elves, playing in the garden. Butterflies and bees were also attracted by the fragrance of the garden and rushed to join in the fun. Butterflies dance among the flowers, and their colorful wings shimmer charmingly in the sun, as if they are flying flowers. The bees are busy shuttling through the flowers, and their buzzing sounds seem to be playing a hymn to this beautiful garden.


lake after the rain is like a huge mirror reflecting the sky, the mountains and everything around it. The lake water is clear and calm, with only a few occasional ripples, like silk wrinkled by the wind. The lotus leaves in the lake are rolling with water droplets, like pearls in a jade plate, crystal clear. Surrounded by lotus leaves, the lotus flowers bloom gracefully on the lake. some lotus flowers are still budding flower bones, like a shy girl, wearing a veil, quietly waiting for their own blooming moment; Some lotus flowers are in full bloom, with pink petals layered on top of each other, revealing tender yellow stamens in the middle, like a graceful fairy, dancing lightly in the breeze. The weeping willows by the lake, the slender willow branches hanging down on the lake, like girls in green dressing up in the lake. Their shadows are reflected in the lake, and the lotus flowers and lotus leaves in the lake complement each other, forming a beautiful ink painting.


world after rain is a masterpiece carefully drawn by the amazing painter of nature. Every scenery is full of vitality and agility, which are intertwined and complement each other, forming a harmonious and beautiful whole. In this world baptized by rain, everything is singing joyfully, telling the love and gratitude for nature. And we, in this picturesque beauty, can't help but feel a sense of awe and love for nature in our hearts, as if we have become a note in this wonderful movement, playing this song after the rain with all things.  


Analysis: The article uses a wealth of rhetorical techniques, such as personification ("rain, the spirit of nature"), metaphor ("the clouds are as fluffy and white as cotton"), and the parallel ("red is warm and unrestrained, orange is warm and soft......"), etc., vividly depicting the beautiful scene of nature after the rain. Through these rhetorical devices, the central idea of the article is clearly expressed: that is, nature after the rain is full of vitality, and all things show their own unique beauty and vitality under the baptism of rain, forming a harmonious and beautiful picture. At the same time, the article also conveys people's awe and love for nature, as well as the beautiful vision of harmonious coexistence with nature, so that readers can feel the joy and sublimation of the soul in reading.

標籤: It seems that the rain after the rain the scenery after the rain 雨後景色

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